I got a lot of good feedback on my zombie story. Different people liked different parts. I don't want to turn this into something bland and universally acceptable, written by committee, but one of the universal comments was, "needs more plot, man".
How to get that? Suggestions went from one end of the spectrum to the other. I think I have an idea of how to make it work. I don't have any idea of where I would send it, though, so I'll just have to cross that bridge when I get there.
I could always just post it here, but I think that would prompt me to keep fiddling with it. Once it's in print somewhere, it's frozen.