tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post7509834396562775275..comments2024-03-08T15:14:31.312-05:00Comments on Landless: #FridayFlash: Another Glass of ChardonnayTony Nolandhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15090583562737225942noreply@blogger.comBlogger38125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-21156795332929813332010-03-23T15:47:53.221-04:002010-03-23T15:47:53.221-04:00Cathy: I have to agree. I don't think he's...<b>Cathy</b>: I have to agree. I don't think he's behaving all that badly.<br /><br />Interestingly, the jerk/non-jerk opinions here do not seem to be strictly gender-associated.Tony Nolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15090583562737225942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-16838386853428701232010-03-23T08:22:59.808-04:002010-03-23T08:22:59.808-04:00How come everybody's picking on the stud-muffi...How come everybody's picking on the stud-muffin in the tux? Why not pick on those sex-starved skank-pots in peach lace?<br />Skank-pot... what a great word! I might use that sometime....Cathy Olliffe-Websterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12729578896443750402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-3938848587021629602010-03-22T13:13:53.785-04:002010-03-22T13:13:53.785-04:00Steamy! I also want to know what they will do...Steamy! I also want to know what they will do...Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-27643610387063888842010-03-22T09:26:40.543-04:002010-03-22T09:26:40.543-04:00bwahaha!
So, er, what inspired this one exactly.....bwahaha!<br /><br />So, er, what inspired this one exactly...?mazzz in Leedshttp://mazzz-in-leeds.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-12748502988543087022010-03-21T09:47:32.646-04:002010-03-21T09:47:32.646-04:00oooh! Hot, Hot, Hot. Sir. I think I may have been ...oooh! Hot, Hot, Hot. Sir. I think I may have been in a situation similar to that long ago. Ha!<br />I'm all for a sequel......for your story, not my long ago situation. :-)<br /><br />BTW, love the new look of your blog.<br /><br />Great job on both counts:-)Cynthia Schuerrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03975914802967433794noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-20339385637589221812010-03-21T07:58:05.762-04:002010-03-21T07:58:05.762-04:00Your comments are terrific, guys. I'm glad you...Your comments are terrific, guys. I'm glad you all are having as much fun with this as I am.<br /><br />8-)Tony Nolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15090583562737225942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-64117924932795139622010-03-20T19:19:05.010-04:002010-03-20T19:19:05.010-04:00A great story and it must have been an open bar at...A great story and it must have been an open bar at the reception!https://www.blogger.com/profile/09492062472206579391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-57745447565769099492010-03-20T17:27:45.215-04:002010-03-20T17:27:45.215-04:00I'm with Ganymeder on this one - I think it...I'm with Ganymeder on this one - I think it's an example of everybody behaving badly. But as far as cringe-worthy flash fiction, you've nailed it, Tony - well done!PJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07521953491880916840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-21492472463890566312010-03-20T16:26:36.889-04:002010-03-20T16:26:36.889-04:00Clever and totally cringe-worthy! Lol! Really good...Clever and totally cringe-worthy! Lol! Really good stuff!Amyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01304850820653245569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-11033622347942729482010-03-20T13:02:56.494-04:002010-03-20T13:02:56.494-04:00Ha! What a fun romp! You really laid on the heat t...Ha! What a fun romp! You really laid on the heat this time - very titillating. I think Daniel knew exactly what he was doing - trying to coax both sisters in bed at the same time. I still give him a jerk rating in the scheme of things and I'm sure he thought he was quite suave and was going to get his way.<br /><br />It is a cruel point to stop the story, sequel please.Anne Tyler Lordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16909141266966569378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-18490012959513267092010-03-20T09:43:42.106-04:002010-03-20T09:43:42.106-04:00HA! Such a clever man... I am referring to you Mr....HA! Such a clever man... I am referring to you Mr. Noland.<br /><br />Always leave them guessing :-)<br />~2Tomara Armstronghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17185889402088565686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-4046288768692977122010-03-20T08:06:43.720-04:002010-03-20T08:06:43.720-04:00Maybe some people think he's a jerk because he...Maybe some people think he's a jerk because he doesn't just move their hands aside to prevent them being embarrassed, he purposefully makes sure they see what they're both doing.Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01425418200940737247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-86669628429580704982010-03-20T05:37:42.774-04:002010-03-20T05:37:42.774-04:00I can just see this getting more comlicated, a foo...I can just see this getting more comlicated, a foot from the other side of teh table joining in perhaps /<br /><br />lol good stuffChancehttp://thedeadadventurersclub.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-80110175436283445652010-03-19T22:30:41.436-04:002010-03-19T22:30:41.436-04:00"giving each the kind of smile that would lig..."giving each the kind of smile that would light a cigarette across a crowded bar." -beautiful<br /><br />Depending on the naughty scale of the sisters, Daniel could be one very lucky devil.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-17728198884932767602010-03-19T22:06:42.266-04:002010-03-19T22:06:42.266-04:00Yeah, I could see this happening. Interesting cat ...Yeah, I could see this happening. Interesting cat fight on the horizon; gotta love sisters.Donald Conradhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11299995538611948494noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-47684279563314267612010-03-19T19:49:37.336-04:002010-03-19T19:49:37.336-04:00Ha! There has to be an element of plausibility to...Ha! There has to be an element of plausibility to a story Tony. No man is that good. He He. Just kidding-this was very well done and funny.Genevieve Jackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16178276724159826428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-27345925858566976732010-03-19T19:02:06.027-04:002010-03-19T19:02:06.027-04:00"I did NOT expect the dichotomy of views on w..."I did NOT expect the dichotomy of views on who is at fault here, and whether or not Daniel is a jerk."<br /><br />And here I was going to offer up a psychological profile of Daniel. Kidding! Fun read, especially this woman going in for the kill. Thanks Tony.Lou Freshwaterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08849342766852653969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-73770955699267266272010-03-19T18:30:16.771-04:002010-03-19T18:30:16.771-04:00I saw Daniel as being quite smooth in this situati...I saw Daniel as being quite smooth in this situation. If he'd let them go right away, they'd have caused a big scene. Of course, he did lead the hands on...<br /><br />Good, fun story!Eric J. Krausehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-281248431209297572010-03-19T16:08:09.324-04:002010-03-19T16:08:09.324-04:00Thanks so much for all the comments, guys. I have ...Thanks so much for all the comments, guys. I have to say, while I expected this to be titillating and amusing, I did NOT expect the dichotomy of views on who is at fault here, and whether or not Daniel is a jerk.<br /><br />As Mr. Spock would say, it's fascinating.Tony Nolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15090583562737225942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-1641588951368360652010-03-19T14:43:23.348-04:002010-03-19T14:43:23.348-04:00I see a cat fight coming. :) This was such a fun r...I see a cat fight coming. :) This was such a fun read Tony - well done!Deanna Schrayerhttp://theothersideofdeanna.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-1913078862298813512010-03-19T13:59:59.091-04:002010-03-19T13:59:59.091-04:00Who picked up the check?
marc nashWho picked up the check?<br /><br />marc nashSulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-1743550542785404662010-03-19T11:16:46.548-04:002010-03-19T11:16:46.548-04:00Very entertaining! I've never had even one gir...Very entertaining! I've never had even one girl try this, let alone two. He's very poised in this situation, so I guess it's not a surprise to him. I don't know why people are calling him a jerk, though. What was he supposed to do? Each sister would have found out what the other one was doing very soon. He was just having a little fun with the situation. This is really a fun little story!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08236529774839136879noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-88530626362137821252010-03-19T05:26:01.315-04:002010-03-19T05:26:01.315-04:00Personally, I'd ball that hand into a fist and...Personally, I'd ball that hand into a fist and thump him in the crotch, but then I'm not very nice. Then again, nor is he!<br /><br />Excellent flash.Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-90049112135903732942010-03-19T04:54:45.079-04:002010-03-19T04:54:45.079-04:00Ugh! This is cute and clever but I can't over ...Ugh! This is cute and clever but I can't over how embarrassing it would be... not that I'd try this kind of thing, er, no. Um.<br /><br />Thanks for the cringe, Tony. :)Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01425418200940737247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-65511945924653874482010-03-19T02:41:08.640-04:002010-03-19T02:41:08.640-04:00Cracking last line. This builds really nicely. The...Cracking last line. This builds really nicely. The shock and distaste of the sisters played out well. Daniel holding them until this passed really showed his character. I don't really want to know more, I like the open ending and each reader having the decision to make.dan powellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14131553102349479513noreply@blogger.com