tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post3975732678329913210..comments2024-03-08T15:14:31.312-05:00Comments on Landless: Wednesday #Poetry: Damp, Incensed, SkidTony Nolandhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15090583562737225942noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-31129326540331103812011-05-25T11:43:52.679-04:002011-05-25T11:43:52.679-04:00magical capture of your sentiments, way to go,
sh...magical capture of your sentiments, way to go,<br /><br />share a piece with us today.Hyde Park Poetry Palacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04817313233737719262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-73278845965045265092011-05-23T13:31:17.047-04:002011-05-23T13:31:17.047-04:00Well done; your poem /
swirls with tension and thi...Well done; your poem /<br />swirls with tension and thick fog, /<br />waiting for the punch.<br /><br />http://beespoetry.wordpress.com/2011/05/23/a-good-man/<br />I went light this week, because last week's (Romeo Before Juliet) wasn't my best work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-69638242552277851082011-05-20T21:42:14.952-04:002011-05-20T21:42:14.952-04:00tight piece. you painted an intense picture...bot...tight piece. you painted an intense picture...both visually and emotionallyRMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-73517967081004273272011-05-20T02:01:07.574-04:002011-05-20T02:01:07.574-04:00Great use of the wordsGreat use of the wordsAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-46026908111051304542011-05-19T18:49:41.273-04:002011-05-19T18:49:41.273-04:00Thanks for reading and for the comments, guys! As ...Thanks for reading and for the comments, guys! As it happens <b>Old Altonian</b>, I had the word "killer" in place of "mugger", right up to the final draft, when I changed it. I pulled the punch at the last minute. Somehow, it seems to fit more with a noir atmosphere, rather than being a clear Jack the Ripper homage which "killer" would have invoked. Too far in the other direction?Tony Nolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15090583562737225942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-60738567168966968212011-05-19T11:12:42.428-04:002011-05-19T11:12:42.428-04:00Very atmospheric & entertaining poem; but a mu...Very atmospheric & entertaining poem; but a mugger wouldn't find much worthwhile on skid row - would he?Altonianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02841390371168941022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-23455413178825600972011-05-19T09:19:38.832-04:002011-05-19T09:19:38.832-04:00I love the tension you creating in just a few line...I love the tension you creating in just a few lines.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-66020074798479979202011-05-19T08:11:16.209-04:002011-05-19T08:11:16.209-04:00That's what a Mugger is supposed to do..well d...That's what a Mugger is supposed to do..well did he..Ramesh Soodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-54535785780990333162011-05-18T21:00:42.434-04:002011-05-18T21:00:42.434-04:00Vivid and dark ....Vivid and dark ....ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-14345661700139167182011-05-18T19:34:18.969-04:002011-05-18T19:34:18.969-04:00dark, yet fundark, yet funJess PJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10775984664764629241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-19020825419509523552011-05-18T15:59:44.895-04:002011-05-18T15:59:44.895-04:00VERY good!VERY good!Sylvia Neyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09700149683391617521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-73471056572790935892011-05-18T15:40:58.564-04:002011-05-18T15:40:58.564-04:00Ya know if I were a mugger you would have given me...Ya know if I were a mugger you would have given me the perfect scenario<br /><br />Love your lightheartedness in a foggy day.moondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-19213538632882774792011-05-18T14:47:41.252-04:002011-05-18T14:47:41.252-04:00Sheilagh Lee said I love the use of Skid row.you c...Sheilagh Lee said I love the use of Skid row.you could picture it all.Sheilagh Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-88565656802380134732011-05-18T11:52:12.124-04:002011-05-18T11:52:12.124-04:00A shady little diddy.A shady little diddy.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563209830154165271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-59068441097376511602011-05-18T09:00:05.817-04:002011-05-18T09:00:05.817-04:00vivid...life in the shadows can be that way...vivid...life in the shadows can be that way...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-22155190106832543472011-05-18T08:53:27.508-04:002011-05-18T08:53:27.508-04:00Spooky! I know you said "Skid Row", but ...Spooky! I know you said "Skid Row", but could be Whitechapel!Janet Lingel Aldrichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05633969913976791146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-23305129208597956982011-05-18T08:50:38.739-04:002011-05-18T08:50:38.739-04:00I like this! Great atmosphere to it, I could almos...I like this! Great atmosphere to it, I could almost feel the fog swirling around me as I read it.Samhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00361651251233078437noreply@blogger.com