tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post3638621127617971578..comments2024-03-08T15:14:31.312-05:00Comments on Landless: Cleansing the CastleTony Nolandhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15090583562737225942noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-30175273059634260032011-06-06T14:08:17.898-04:002011-06-06T14:08:17.898-04:00As I was reading I thought the sentences seemed ra...As I was reading I thought the sentences seemed rather short and kind of stilted. Not that it was a bad thing, but it made much more sense when you said it was written via Twitter.<br /><br />That being said I really love stories like that, and I love strange new forms of telling them, so I think that's pretty awesome.Kelly Lynn Thomashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15826365522696869283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-63229973756912662522011-06-04T14:44:50.223-04:002011-06-04T14:44:50.223-04:00Thanks, guys. If you happened to see this unfold o...Thanks, guys. If you happened to see this unfold on Twitter, that time-delay between sections might make you see it differently than here, where you can see it all at a glance.<br /><br />It was writing as live performance art, which is so avant-guard that I'm amazed I just said it.Tony Nolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15090583562737225942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-123030818520711012011-06-03T23:58:28.437-04:002011-06-03T23:58:28.437-04:00Why didn't these people actually clean the cas...Why didn't these people actually clean the castle to see if the women would calm down? <br /><br />Weird and creepy story, Tony. Another nice one. :)Marihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07303695124956391293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-87092711336667722702011-06-03T19:46:36.240-04:002011-06-03T19:46:36.240-04:00I liked the story, but was more intrigued that you...I liked the story, but was more intrigued that you spun it over Twitter, 140 COL at a time. What an intr'sting idea.<br /><br />Somebody should have at least offered to buy 'em some ice cream.<br /><br /><a href="http://writinginflow.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Writing in Flow</a>Beverly Diehlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00392288953821757887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-9202105475745557852011-06-03T17:39:19.519-04:002011-06-03T17:39:19.519-04:00I love a good ghost story and by gum you gave us o...I love a good ghost story and by gum you gave us one!Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-73538769395250601632011-06-03T15:59:55.535-04:002011-06-03T15:59:55.535-04:00Somebody should have given those poor women a brea...Somebody should have given those poor women a break and turned off the video. How can you expect anyone to work like that 24/7 and not catch a little bit of the crazies?<br /><br />A justified ending, Tony.Stephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04753736809917062955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-41947305561467894882011-06-03T15:45:56.042-04:002011-06-03T15:45:56.042-04:00I agree with Cindy...great escape from work.
I...I agree with Cindy...great escape from work.<br /><br />I'm still trying to invent a reason they would do this...but by gum Ill get one eventually<br /><br />Thanks TonyAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16518183823230864763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797188666559531190.post-86038072009242144102011-06-03T14:17:15.683-04:002011-06-03T14:17:15.683-04:00Very interesting in a bizarre sort of way. I liked...Very interesting in a bizarre sort of way. I liked it! Great escape from afteroon boredom at work. Hee hee.Cindyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17454866856237157595noreply@blogger.com