Wednesday #Poetry: Cease, Heat, Nasty

Welcome to my regular Wednesday poetry corner, brought to you by Three Word Wednesday and One Shot Wednesday.

Today's words are Cease, Heat, Nasty.

Bright sun beats down, and it's nasty
This heat's like a furnace, all blast-y
I'm thirsty, so cease
These "good manners", please!
Give me a beer, not a half-assed tea!


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10 comments:

  1. broken biroJul 6, 2011, 7:21:00 AM

    Mmmmm.... beer.

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  2. Pat HattJul 6, 2011, 9:25:00 AM

    I'll take some rum
    If alcohol I have to strum

    But yes the heat is a pain
    Makes me pop a vein

    haha, nicely spun write.

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  3. Laurie KolpJul 6, 2011, 9:28:00 AM

    No beer for me, I'd rather have tea... = )

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  4. Sheilagh LeeJul 6, 2011, 10:22:00 AM

    Sheilagh Lee said: I was laughing before I even finished wonderful poem Tony,

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  5. cosmos camiJul 6, 2011, 11:33:00 AM

    Such a great rhythm, especially with those first two lines.

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  6. UnknownJul 6, 2011, 11:54:00 AM

    Another fantastic piece from you!! Loved it!!!

    Although... there's nothing like a nice hot brew!!! :) xx

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  7. Brian MillerJul 6, 2011, 1:13:00 PM

    if you got more than one
    i will join you in that
    relief from the heat

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  8. Kwee Cats and ArtJul 6, 2011, 7:07:00 PM

    I enjoyed that. Nothing beats a good brew on a hot day. I was curious how you were going to link the 3 words together. You did it very well. Thank you!

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  9. AnonymousJul 8, 2011, 12:36:00 PM

    Very amusing =)

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  10. UnknownJul 9, 2011, 1:23:00 PM

    And I'll take a Gin and Juice!

    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/07/09/altered-reverie/

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